tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post6602414454627422109..comments2023-07-17T19:23:33.207+05:30Comments on ManMahesh's Journey: Love LaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-21831134649638411952011-07-02T22:05:41.694+05:302011-07-02T22:05:41.694+05:30This is really awesome, hats off...This is really awesome, hats off...G S Ranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04773967881528108529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-57544366978097944952010-04-16T21:56:21.931+05:302010-04-16T21:56:21.931+05:30MIP-welcome back. write more on your blog. I miss ...MIP-welcome back. write more on your blog. I miss your posts.<br /><br />Dipali-Thank you dear.<br /><br />Deep Jagdeep-The Punjabi translation is great. But I didn't quite catch your comment 'why we boast so much'. Kindly elaborate on this.Mampihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02151567171626446275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-64143699308495550862010-04-16T16:04:42.151+05:302010-04-16T16:04:42.151+05:30Why we boast so much. huh!!!
btw
let me contribute...Why we boast so much. huh!!!<br />btw<br />let me contribute in this too.<br /><br />ਪਰਖ<br /><br />ਮੁਬਾਰਕਾਂ!<br />ਤੂੰ<br />ਅਸਫ਼ਲ ਹੋ ਗਿਐਂ<br />ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਪਰਖਣ ਵਾਲੇ<br />ਮੇਰੇ ਇਮਤਿਹਾਨ ਵਿਚ<br />ਜਦੋਂ ਮੈਂ ਕਹੀ ਸੀ<br />‘ਨਾਂਹ’<br /><br />ਮੈਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਪੁਲ ਤਾਂ ਉਸਾਰੇ<br />ਪਰ <br />ਤੇਰੇ ਤੀਕਰ ਆਉਣ ਲਈ<br />ਉਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਪਾਰ ਨਹੀਂ ਕੀਤਾ<br /><br />ਹੁਣ <br />ਬਚਿਆ ਹੈ ਬੱਸ<br />ਖਾਲੀ ਲਾਇਬ੍ਰੇਰੀ ਵਿਚ<br />ਐਂਵੇ ਹੀ ਘੁੰਮਦਿਆਂ<br />ਮਿੱਟੀ ਲੱਦੀਆਂ ਜਿਲਦਾਂ<br />ਅਤੇ<br />ਫਿਕੇ ਪੈ ਗਏ ਪਿਆਰ<br />ਨੂੰ ਤੱਕਣਾDeep Jagdeep Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09390553388468161998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-45597190872328205392010-03-14T21:41:51.309+05:302010-03-14T21:41:51.309+05:30Very nice, Mamps.Very nice, Mamps.dipalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01070862196307376073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-54408944423111628872010-03-08T09:45:30.161+05:302010-03-08T09:45:30.161+05:30That was a nice one , mampi.
After a long time, it...That was a nice one , mampi.<br />After a long time, it was nice to read you again.Frankly, your visit to my blog space made me very happy.a sort of nostalgia..:)<br />i haven't blogged since last december..something is holding me back..also i am shuttling betwen my family and work place..trasfer stuff...<br />hope you and your family are ok and happy<br />take careman in paintinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00254963438882088535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-59061000693214879362010-03-06T16:15:26.025+05:302010-03-06T16:15:26.025+05:30Ash- Glad you liked it.
Jagjit-Thanks.
Pinku-Wel...Ash- Glad you liked it.<br /><br />Jagjit-Thanks.<br /><br />Pinku-Well and that also establishes that “once a teacher, always a teacher? Putting people thru tests?” <br /><br />Mama-Thanks, Will try to keep it up.<br /><br />Anon-Are you Foucault's ghost? Thanks for coming even if you aren't. Think of it as an independent entity-I have cut the umbilical cord. The poems is on its own now. It would have been good if you had left a name too. Do visit again.<br /><br />SS-Well said.<br /><br />Ritu-Yes, It haunted me too for quite a while before I wrote it down.Mampihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02151567171626446275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-84463246756850345142010-03-06T14:37:31.384+05:302010-03-06T14:37:31.384+05:30Awesome! haunting and awesomeAwesome! haunting and awesomePhoenixrituhttp://www.phoenixritu.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-78030483107750386622010-03-06T00:05:38.286+05:302010-03-06T00:05:38.286+05:30Hum laboN se keh na paaye unse haal-e-dil kabhi
Au...<i>Hum laboN se keh na paaye unse haal-e-dil kabhi<br />Aur woh samjhe nahiN ye khaamoshi kya cheez hai</i>Sidhusaahebhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08428201823375343016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-31180755649781958982010-03-05T22:26:32.065+05:302010-03-05T22:26:32.065+05:30am wondering what bridges the protagonist of the p...am wondering what bridges the protagonist of the poem wants to cross...<br /><br />she is in love but doesn't go all the way...<br /><br />she is in love but is hurt in the process...there's also veiled bit of complaint for the man not coming...<br /><br />is it rejection? is it finally realizing the futility? you have left us all wondering, and that makes the poem successful :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-28396057744382325482010-03-05T22:04:30.066+05:302010-03-05T22:04:30.066+05:30Nice posting!
Being in library is itself a commitm...Nice posting!<br />Being in library is itself a commitment to something creative.Go on, have new experiences like this in poetry.<br />DhindsaRajindarjithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08452152548077874186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-66121941385049991472010-03-05T20:33:09.865+05:302010-03-05T20:33:09.865+05:30at times such as these...
on better days u at lea...at times such as these...<br /><br />on better days u at least have the opportunity to believe that you set too hard a test...Pinkuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06714914168230658950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-6815252618784731152010-03-05T15:34:01.484+05:302010-03-05T15:34:01.484+05:30nice, mampi :)nice, mampi :)Jagjithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177115763108467889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-7382517504137401462010-03-05T13:27:29.803+05:302010-03-05T13:27:29.803+05:30..awesome....awesome..Ashwanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08944037236939149462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-58111402760586304262010-03-05T09:07:16.552+05:302010-03-05T09:07:16.552+05:30Anon-Yes, you are right. It means both. Just a pla...Anon-Yes, you are right. It means both. Just a play on the word.<br /><br />LB-These are just lines, read them. Dont read between them.<br /><br />IHM- :)<br /><br />Savi-Thanks, your encouragement means a lot.<br /><br />Mithe-Loving is fulfilment in itself. It does not need completion.<br /><br />Sneo-Nah, it was just the moment.<br /><br />Liju-I am fine buddy. But Thanks.Mampihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02151567171626446275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-14249149035637674302010-03-05T08:59:46.614+05:302010-03-05T08:59:46.614+05:30work stress is getting you. Aaapko chahiye Cinkar...work stress is getting you. Aaapko chahiye Cinkara :)Liju Philiphttp://philip9876.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-85361272669174670182010-03-04T22:17:23.107+05:302010-03-04T22:17:23.107+05:30Aww, what happened? You seem down?
it's ok.. j...Aww, what happened? You seem down?<br />it's ok.. just a test...S.. Divahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10238837853038485360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-24613332467179470422010-03-04T22:01:17.851+05:302010-03-04T22:01:17.851+05:30Why so sad Ma'am? Why wasn't the love fulf...Why so sad Ma'am? Why wasn't the love fulfilled?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-15660360215634561962010-03-04T19:32:17.457+05:302010-03-04T19:32:17.457+05:30great..............great..............Swarnjit Savihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09478157743988907592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-80553638529126983782010-03-04T17:08:33.640+05:302010-03-04T17:08:33.640+05:30Mampi I had to google borsalino test :) You are go...Mampi I had to google borsalino test :) You are good for my GK :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-65046065504641803502010-03-04T14:49:00.703+05:302010-03-04T14:49:00.703+05:30Sounds very nice but is bit too high for my meagre...Sounds very nice but is bit too high for my meagre poetry understanding. Could not comprehend and read between lines.<br />You are a true poetess - putting us readers to full swing thinking.Life Beginshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06298369740866257327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25965818.post-43284949453453232982010-03-04T14:13:58.690+05:302010-03-04T14:13:58.690+05:30awesome, and what's with the title? La as in a...awesome, and what's with the title? La as in a "pass"?<br /><br />A love pass? Or love passes?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com