a face
a smile
a glow
to you.
To me
you are
a dot
in the dark
that you weave around
yourself.
The dot
that
I refuse
to
move
or
remove.
Thursday, July 22, 2010
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22 comments:
hmmm.... ai hai kidde layi?
I couldn't understand the second paragraph. What is meant by a dot in the dark?
I really loved your poem..it has so much depth in it..but HDWK is right..who is this for? When I read it first, I thought it was for your inner self...is it?
mm, lemme see... that dot in the dark is a soul whom you haven't met...whom you can't let go...whom you want to meet and don't want to at the same time...
chalo, ho gaya ji critical appreciation..
HDWK- Only you could have asked this question.
:)
SS-Chaddo ji, kee rakheya balle balle wich.
Mithe- Poem parho tey aish karo bas.
Oreen-Critics have dissected many a moment of creativity, and ended up as lost as the poet.
..welcome back Mampi..what kept you occupied all these days...
Thank God you have posted something!
(Zyaada samajh nahin aaya, par koi gal nahin!)
"I with You" for how long? Would You and I ever dig the us?
reminded me of a poem read long ago about the two ends of a compass. Where in one end stays stationary while the other roams the world.
dont know why...but it did.
Gad to see u writing again.
welcome back to the blogoshpere. So ncie to see a post from you. Nice deep and thought provoking words...I suddenly remembered all those thoughts hidden inside .which are like a dark truths somewhere inside...about which noone knows and I want it to remain there silently and peacefully. i dont want to remember it neither do i want to forget about it.
Wow Mampi, you did a splendid job. A crisp, meaningful and thoughtful poem. Write more.I liked the title best.
i am a blogger
an invisible blogger
with a blog that needs updates
it has a name
comments
readers
lurkers
a header
a header that i have never changed...
:) Good to see you back :)
It sounds good to see on ur blog back. Keep it up!
Try to up date it with ur new as well as previous poem;
Very thought provoking poem it is!
Dhindsa
That was cryptic and enigmatic!
Lovely one.
dedicated to someone special eh ;)
Through these simple words
you have expressed something very profound to you
and yet it leaves a lot of room
for the reader to imagine
what to make of it
from where they come...
beautiful lines!
Mampi, whenever earlier I logged on to your blog, there used to be a signature song welcoming the reader of your posts. In my last many visits, I have missed it. Sudhir
Where are you?
Thanks for all your comments.
Jald aa rahi hoon...
cool.. yeah.. where is your song.. put a nice rahat fateh ali ... o re piya.. suits u.. :)
beautiful words n feelings u expressed there my dear..
Love this one :)
totally blank!!!!!unable to understand!!!!sorry
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