I am a character in a play, you said.
…..
I am fighting with myself, you said.
….
Perhaps
One character
Is fighting with another...
A play within a play?
You filled a void.
You left a void.
I filled my void,
I created my void.
What is this place?
Your presence
Makes the heart lonelier…
Words,
Our connection-
Broken,
Chapped
Bleeding,
Hurt.
14 comments:
Me first!!!! :D
Finally a blog post! And that too a poem. Lovely! Sad but lovely
"you filled a void
you left a void"
such voids are never filled and there is a strange mix of pleasure-pain in guarding that void. The absence authenticating the presence in some manner.
Hope all voids get filled up real soon in your life Mampi. And the ones that remain are the ones that you would have so.
wah wah wah update after ages and that too a lovely one :)
fantastic... how can broken lines connect so much, and so well?
oi is everything alrite??
hoping this is just tot and not connected to anything... anyways *hugzzzz* girl!
beautiful words... u should get it all published... I love the expression.. feelings.. beautiful .. may you always write beautiful and passionate ..
Nice entry!
Keep it up!!
Dhindsa
Words,
Our connection-
Broken,
Chapped
Bleeding,
Hurt.
Wow...very profound....
Dramatic!
and then
one morning you open the window
and there he is
imaginary bouquet in his hands
and a silent sorry in his eyes
the void?
we will think of that tomorrow
let's make unbounded love
today
do we share a connection?
you spoke the words, my soul was rumminating over..
and how beautiful their expression!
So sad:(
things will change!!!!nothing is permanent!!
This poem attracted me to be here hey i could not find any follow button here, why?
Best regards
philip
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